PapaDrom (7:48:58 PM): {{{HUGS}}}

 

Auto response from Miz Angelical (7:49:01 PM): haircut

 

PapaDrom (7:53:51 PM): I don't want to run away, but I can't take it, I don't understand, if I'm not made for you, then why does my heart tell me that I am, is there anyway that I can stay in your arms?

 

Session concluded at 7:54:00 PM

 

PapaDrom (8:03:21 PM): http://www.explodingdog.com/aug3/cheerup.html
PapaDrom (8:13:15 PM): http://www.explodingdog.com/january2/whycantiseeyou.html

 

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PapaDrom (8:24:20 PM): http://www.explodingdog.com/january2/ineedtoknowificantrustyou.html
PapaDrom (8:25:09 PM): http://www.explodingdog.com/january2/yourecute.html
PapaDrom (8:27:43 PM): http://www.explodingdog.com/aug3/iloveyou.html
PapaDrom (8:45:42 PM): http://www.explodingdog.com/one24/imissyou.html

 

Auto response from Miz Angelical (8:45:42 PM): haircut

 

 

Session concluded at 8:51:31 PM

 

PapaDrom (9:18:59 PM): I miss you darlin
PapaDrom (9:19:11 PM): but I have to go to the roadhouse now to dj
PapaDrom (9:19:25 PM): I hope I'll get to talk to you tomorrow
PapaDrom (9:19:34 PM): byeeeeeee
Miz Angelical (9:19:38 PM): byeeee
Miz Angelical (9:19:45 PM): missin you too
PapaDrom (9:19:55 PM): Yo it's Joe
Miz Angelical (9:20:02 PM): heey
PapaDrom (9:20:32 PM): I haven't touched the paper all.......but I am ready to work on it now
Miz Angelical (9:22:09 PM): alrigh sweet dea
Miz Angelical (9:22:13 PM): l
Miz Angelical (9:23:38 PM): /cracks knuckles bring it onn
PapaDrom (9:23:49 PM): lol
PapaDrom (9:23:59 PM): My pizza just got here
PapaDrom (9:24:08 PM): I am a manager at papajohns but I LOVE dominos
PapaDrom (9:24:20 PM): I need to get it from my e-mail
PapaDrom (9:24:23 PM): give me 1 sec
Miz Angelical (9:24:25 PM): eeew dominos is the suck
PapaDrom (9:24:29 PM): lol
PapaDrom (9:29:58 PM): I did something useful
PapaDrom (9:30:01 PM): I thought of a title
Miz Angelical (9:30:03 PM): oh?
Miz Angelical (9:30:10 PM): well goood
PapaDrom (9:30:19 PM): A Right, Not a Privilage
Miz Angelical (9:30:28 PM): that usually gives me the hardest time
Miz Angelical (9:30:48 PM): not bad, not bad
Miz Angelical (9:30:55 PM): i like it~
PapaDrom (9:31:16 PM): kool
Miz Angelical (9:31:33 PM): raRr
Miz Angelical (9:32:47 PM): i'll brb~
PapaDrom (9:32:57 PM): k
Miz Angelical signed off at 9:33:33 PM.
Miz Angelical signed on at 9:36:30 PM.
PapaDrom (9:39:18 PM): What sentence would you consider to be the thesis statement?
Miz Angelical (9:40:23 PM): have you added to it at all?
PapaDrom (9:40:42 PM): Nah I am thinking of the next sentence
PapaDrom (9:40:59 PM): It should be something like.......and to take that right away would be wrong
Miz Angelical (9:41:10 PM): it's where you summarize your thoughts that you are about to display in the upcoming paragraphs
Miz Angelical (9:42:29 PM): well or like to stop debate would be against human nature for one thing, and a waste of the right of freedom of speech
PapaDrom (9:43:26 PM): So you are saying that this next sentence needs to be the thesis statement
Miz Angelical (9:43:40 PM): it should be coming up
Miz Angelical (9:43:41 PM): yes
PapaDrom (9:44:52 PM): ok
PapaDrom (9:44:57 PM): hmmmm.....lemme think
Miz Angelical (9:45:41 PM): well what you wanna think about is what you think the upcoming paragraphs are going to be discussing
PapaDrom (9:46:36 PM): They will summarize my rebellion ( Muah hah hah)
Miz Angelical (9:47:13 PM): lol noo you must passs
PapaDrom (9:47:49 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (9:47:56 PM): it's not a very long paper reallyy you'll do it no problem
PapaDrom (9:48:06 PM): I am starting the statement with ........therefore.......
Miz Angelical (9:48:14 PM): i've got 3 pages to write on some dead guy
Miz Angelical (9:48:35 PM): mmm you don't start sentences with therefore really.. :-\
Miz Angelical (9:48:41 PM): well
PapaDrom (9:48:42 PM): oh
Miz Angelical (9:48:55 PM): it's usually something that follows a comma
PapaDrom (9:49:01 PM): any ideas....I'm drawing a blank
PapaDrom (9:49:05 PM): oh
Miz Angelical (9:49:10 PM): like a second part of a sentences
Miz Angelical (9:49:12 PM): sure hmm
PapaDrom (9:49:28 PM): The sentence seems to be running on quite a bit.
PapaDrom (9:49:55 PM): I thought I should make the thesis statement a completely new sentence......but obviously you know what you are doing
Miz Angelical (9:50:08 PM): lol we just won't add on to it :P
Miz Angelical (9:50:21 PM): noo noo you're completely right
Miz Angelical (9:50:41 PM): i don't mean to shoot you down like i did
PapaDrom (9:50:47 PM): I am?........lol.......Give me a moment to let those words sink in
Miz Angelical (9:50:48 PM): sorry
Miz Angelical (9:51:03 PM): aw come on, you don't give yourself enough credit
PapaDrom (9:51:06 PM): I thought therefore fit in there quite well
Miz Angelical (9:51:37 PM): well it would sound that way if it were heard
Miz Angelical (9:52:02 PM): but written out i'm pretty sure it's usually a clause in a compound sentence
Miz Angelical (9:52:18 PM): it's up there with starting a sentence with So, or Because,
PapaDrom (9:52:22 PM): good point
Miz Angelical (9:52:42 PM): it's easy enough to reword anyway
Miz Angelical (9:52:57 PM): alright well pretend it does work
PapaDrom (9:53:01 PM): How about start it with......Basically what I am trying to say is........
Miz Angelical (9:53:04 PM): what would you say after that?
PapaDrom (9:53:25 PM): I know one of my points would be that it is Unconstitutional
Miz Angelical (9:53:53 PM): right alright
Miz Angelical (9:54:02 PM): how about one or two more
PapaDrom (9:54:09 PM): I am thinking
Miz Angelical (9:54:15 PM): then you can just mush them all in the sentence
Miz Angelical (9:55:30 PM): you could compare americans' freedoms to another country's and how people have died for US citizens to be able to debate moral issues
PapaDrom (9:56:21 PM): Basically what I am trying to say is that it is completely unconstitutional, morally wrong, and.......
PapaDrom (9:56:44 PM): hmmmm......
PapaDrom (9:56:55 PM): Think I can make do with just unconstitutional?
Miz Angelical (9:58:01 PM): well .. considering it's not completely unconstitutional... it's just wasting the rights that are provided to citizens based on the constitution
Miz Angelical (9:58:45 PM): i'm sorry i'm totally not helping this way
PapaDrom (9:58:56 PM): No you are
PapaDrom (9:59:23 PM): I have a small attention span so when someone is talking to me I don't take any of it in.....but when I read it i learn
Miz Angelical (9:59:42 PM): lol i know how that goes
PapaDrom (10:00:11 PM): Can I make a paper out of that one point?
Miz Angelical (10:01:08 PM): that it's unconstitutional?
PapaDrom (10:01:19 PM): No the way you worded
Miz Angelical (10:01:36 PM): yea, you could twist it around enough i think
PapaDrom (10:01:38 PM): well .. considering it's not completely unconstitutional... it's just wasting the rights that are provided to citizens based on the constitution
Miz Angelical (10:01:54 PM): just.. making sure :P
PapaDrom (10:03:08 PM): I got it!!!!
Miz Angelical (10:03:15 PM): yAY
PapaDrom (10:03:32 PM): . Although this is not completely unconstitutional, it is however wasting the rights that are provided to citizens based on the constitution.
PapaDrom (10:03:44 PM): I just combined what we both said
Miz Angelical (10:03:50 PM): perfect :-)
Miz Angelical (10:04:14 PM): good .. i think "basically what i'm trying to say" is too informal
Miz Angelical (10:05:03 PM): oooh i see an oppurtunity to whip out the thesaurus ;-)
PapaDrom (10:06:51 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:07:07 PM): noooooooo
PapaDrom (10:07:08 PM): here
PapaDrom (10:07:17 PM): . Although this is not completely unconstitutional, it is however wasting the rights that are provided to citizens based on the constitution
Miz Angelical (10:07:55 PM): .....................Although this is not completely unconstitutional, it is, however, squandering the rights that are provided by the constitution.
Miz Angelical (10:08:05 PM): squander is a cool word
Miz Angelical (10:08:06 PM): ;-)
PapaDrom (10:08:08 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:09:26 PM): Although this is not completely unconstitutional, it is, however, squandering the rights that are provided to American citizens by on the constitution.



Miz Angelical (10:09:53 PM): exactly right
Miz Angelical (10:10:07 PM): no "on" at the end though
PapaDrom (10:10:22 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:10:28 PM): I don't know how that even got there
Miz Angelical (10:10:45 PM): lol um.. i haven't a clue
Miz Angelical (10:11:07 PM): unless you meant to write "on the constitution"
PapaDrom (10:11:11 PM): Does that work as a thesis statement?
Miz Angelical (10:11:32 PM): it could do as the thesis statement
PapaDrom (10:11:36 PM): kool
Miz Angelical (10:11:39 PM): yess
Miz Angelical (10:11:42 PM): huRRaY
Miz Angelical (10:11:46 PM): NEW PArAGrAPH
PapaDrom (10:11:53 PM): To the second paragraph!
Miz Angelical (10:12:09 PM): onwaRd and upwaRd
PapaDrom (10:12:44 PM): 389 to go!
Miz Angelical (10:13:07 PM): seriously?
Miz Angelical (10:13:09 PM): sweet deal
Miz Angelical (10:13:30 PM): i was thinking about it in class
PapaDrom (10:13:34 PM): Hot to start the second paragraph hmmmm........
Miz Angelical (10:13:41 PM): started a debate in french over the question actually
PapaDrom (10:13:49 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:13:55 PM): you can really pull on heart strings with this one
PapaDrom (10:14:00 PM): I know
PapaDrom (10:14:22 PM): It's funny though......when it comes to writing about it......I just draw a blank.......lol
Miz Angelical (10:14:45 PM): ii know, it's widespread
Miz Angelical (10:14:51 PM): writer's block.. ya
PapaDrom (10:15:19 PM): I need a strong opening sentence for the paragraph.
Miz Angelical (10:15:27 PM): danng that's the longest intro paragraph i've ever seen
Miz Angelical (10:15:28 PM): hmm
Miz Angelical (10:15:41 PM): yes yes you do
Miz Angelical (10:15:49 PM): i suggest a quote
PapaDrom (10:17:16 PM): hmmmm from where?
Miz Angelical (10:17:26 PM): something simple is fine
Miz Angelical (10:17:41 PM): like My Country Tis of Thee for instance
Miz Angelical (10:17:49 PM): "land where my fathers died"
PapaDrom (10:18:05 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:18:10 PM): It has to be funny
Miz Angelical (10:18:15 PM): whaat?
Miz Angelical (10:18:16 PM): why?
PapaDrom (10:18:16 PM): I need to keep interest
Miz Angelical (10:18:29 PM): it doesnt have to be funny to do that you knoow
PapaDrom (10:18:40 PM): i guess
Miz Angelical (10:18:45 PM): :-P
PapaDrom (10:19:06 PM): Let's see
PapaDrom (10:21:20 PM): hmmmm
Miz Angelical (10:21:47 PM): so is that a no to quote?
Miz Angelical (10:21:57 PM): i don't have any others off the top of my head
Miz Angelical (10:22:05 PM): but one from the national anthem really
PapaDrom (10:24:09 PM): what's that?
Miz Angelical (10:25:25 PM): Oh thus be it ever, when freemen shall stand
Between their loved homes and the war's desolation!
PapaDrom (10:25:38 PM): geez!
Miz Angelical (10:25:45 PM): lol what?
PapaDrom (10:26:22 PM): That's good but he is going to expect me to do this good on every paper
Miz Angelical (10:26:32 PM): aha
Miz Angelical (10:26:34 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:26:54 PM): well i dont move to mongolia for another month or so
PapaDrom (10:26:58 PM): Is that the national anthem????lol
Miz Angelical (10:26:58 PM): ;-)
Miz Angelical (10:27:05 PM): the 4th verse
Miz Angelical (10:27:19 PM): didnt know there were 4 stanzas didya??
Miz Angelical (10:27:21 PM): :-P
PapaDrom (10:27:49 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:28:05 PM): that's another advantage
PapaDrom (10:28:15 PM): I need to have this done by 11:00AM tomorow
Miz Angelical (10:28:30 PM): your professor might not either and then you'll have shown him ujp
Miz Angelical (10:28:37 PM): plenty of time :-P
PapaDrom (10:28:42 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:29:35 PM): "Today we celebrate our Independence Day"
Miz Angelical (10:30:34 PM): what's that from?
PapaDrom (10:30:47 PM): Independence day
PapaDrom (10:30:48 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:31:09 PM): You know.....Will Smith.,......Aliens
Miz Angelical (10:31:35 PM): who's Will Smith?
Miz Angelical (10:32:04 PM): i'm just kidding :-P
PapaDrom (10:32:06 PM): fresh Prince of Bel Aire
Miz Angelical (10:32:17 PM): yeaa i grew up with that show
Miz Angelical (10:32:19 PM): :-D
PapaDrom (10:32:20 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:32:27 PM): alright here's a possible opening
Miz Angelical (10:32:39 PM): then i gotta make like a pitchfork and hit the hay
PapaDrom (10:32:45 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:32:49 PM): Over the few centuries that the United States of America has existed, wars have been fought and millions of lives have been sacrificed in order to achieve the rights that today's lifestyle takes for granted.
PapaDrom (10:33:02 PM): oooooohhhh
Miz Angelical (10:33:19 PM): aaaaaahhhhh
Miz Angelical (10:33:20 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:34:12 PM): you can easily incorporate "Land where my fathers died" directly following that
Miz Angelical (10:34:24 PM): mmk?
PapaDrom (10:34:34 PM): ummmm how?
PapaDrom (10:34:59 PM): Who said that?
PapaDrom (10:35:04 PM): Abe lincoln?
Miz Angelical (10:35:12 PM): it's in My Country 'Tis of Thee
PapaDrom (10:35:18 PM): oh ic
Miz Angelical (10:35:28 PM): samuel francis smith
PapaDrom (10:35:37 PM): your good
PapaDrom (10:36:04 PM): Is that the name of the song?
PapaDrom (10:36:10 PM): Land where my fathers died
PapaDrom (10:36:20 PM): Or is that A line in the song?
PapaDrom (10:37:40 PM): ?
Miz Angelical (10:38:27 PM): no no the line is "land where my fathers died" from a song called "My Country 'Tis of Thee" by Samuel Francis Smith
PapaDrom (10:38:35 PM): oh
Miz Angelical (10:38:49 PM): circa 1832 :-P
PapaDrom (10:39:03 PM): give me 1 sec to make a sentence
Miz Angelical (10:39:09 PM): alrighty
PapaDrom (10:41:07 PM): As Samuel Francis Smith's song " My Country 'Tis of Thee" so eliquintly put it. "Land Where my Father Died."
PapaDrom (10:42:46 PM): How's that sound? Need a little help cleaning up the sentence though
Miz Angelical (10:45:00 PM): that's awesome
Miz Angelical (10:45:18 PM): okayy we'll add aaaa Just at the beginning
Miz Angelical (10:45:23 PM): and father is plural
PapaDrom (10:45:39 PM): aaaa?
Miz Angelical (10:45:54 PM): a
Miz Angelical (10:45:56 PM): lol
Miz Angelical (10:45:58 PM): sorry
Miz Angelical (10:46:08 PM): Just as Samuel Francis Smith..
PapaDrom (10:46:31 PM): huh?
Miz Angelical (10:46:47 PM): okay modified version:
PapaDrom (10:46:51 PM): Write the sentence how you think it should go so we can avoid confusions
Miz Angelical (10:49:26 PM): Just as Samuel Francis Smith eloquently put it in his song "My Country 'Tis of Thee" in the line saying "Land where my fathers died, " many people have realized just how precious our freedoms truly are.
Miz Angelical (10:50:48 PM): annnd that's where i head off to sleep
PapaDrom (10:50:53 PM): lol
PapaDrom (10:50:56 PM): thank you
Miz Angelical (10:51:13 PM): it's a pleasure~
Miz Angelical (10:52:02 PM): if you want me to proof read through it when you're done, i'll leave an away message up, you can IM it to me and I'll get it back to you corrected tomorrow morning
PapaDrom (10:52:28 PM): ok
Miz Angelical (10:52:55 PM): k? :-) good
Miz Angelical (10:53:01 PM): /shakes hands
Miz Angelical (10:53:03 PM): good luuuck
Miz Angelical (10:53:10 PM): no blanking right?
PapaDrom (10:53:26 PM): already blankin
PapaDrom (10:53:31 PM): bri says hi
Miz Angelical (10:53:48 PM): isnt he djing?
PapaDrom (10:54:00 PM): He wants to know what song you want him to sing?
Miz Angelical (10:56:02 PM): you are my sunshine ;-)
Miz Angelical (10:58:16 PM): oookay okaay, given the darkness of the hour... i'll let him skip it
PapaDrom (11:00:24 PM): lol
PapaDrom (11:01:50 PM): You know this is funy
PapaDrom (11:02:06 PM): the first half of this essay is going to be amazing and the rest is going to sucks ass
Miz Angelical (11:02:55 PM): noooo it's not
PapaDrom (11:03:18 PM): I can't even come remotely close to what you got there
PapaDrom (11:03:23 PM): But I can do it!~!!!
Miz Angelical (11:03:49 PM): yES YOU CAN!!!
Miz Angelical (11:03:55 PM): make bri help you
Miz Angelical (11:04:00 PM): :-P
PapaDrom (11:04:02 PM): ummm.....I just read it
PapaDrom (11:04:22 PM): Can we use all this American stuff even if it isn't in the topic I am writing about
Miz Angelical (11:05:00 PM): well yea
PapaDrom (11:05:11 PM): oh ok
Miz Angelical (11:05:14 PM): see, what you need to do is explain that sorta in the beginning
PapaDrom (11:05:21 PM): oh kool
PapaDrom (11:05:26 PM): brb
Miz Angelical (11:05:45 PM): "assuming that these debates are taking place in the united states.."
Miz Angelical (11:05:48 PM): etc
PapaDrom (11:09:14 PM): ic
PapaDrom (11:09:30 PM): I just realized I ate a whole pizza plus cinnasticx by myself
Miz Angelical (11:10:01 PM): eeeeeeewwwww
Miz Angelical (11:10:02 PM): lol
PapaDrom (11:10:18 PM): yup
Miz Angelical (11:11:13 PM): aHH
Miz Angelical (11:11:18 PM): ok lol good niiight
PapaDrom (11:11:21 PM): night night

 

Session concluded at 11:33:12 PM